00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme
Upgrade Your Account!

HO HO HOPE you become a Newgrounds Supporter this year!

We're working hard to give you the best site possible, but we have bills to pay and community support is vital to keep things going and growing. Thank you for considering!

Become a Supporter so NG can see another Christmas!

TheUniverse

Share Collapse

Author Comments

"Unfinished Constellations"
learn about the universe and how it works


please leave comments on how I could make this better for users

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

Not sure if people have commented on your submission so far, as it's still under judgement, but generally I would suggest the following:
- the Quit button seems somewhat obsolete
- use a sans serif font, as that is more easily intelligible, also use white framed in black colouring for your writing, as that can be read on backgrounds of any colour
- keep the Next/Back buttons in a fixed place for all pages
- the main index seems a bit crowded, space them out over the whole page, perhaps divide them by topics into clusters (as they are already listed following a certain logic)
- use more paragraphs insertions (?) in your text bodies, it will also increase legibility
- the examples images of the different star sizes/blackholes/... were pretty cool, an image (or diagram, or model, or CGI etc.) for every entry would make the entire thing as "dude!"-evoking as the page with the stars.
- is the wikipedia logo supposed to tell the readers that it's your "works cited"?

I still think, this is pretty neat, and certainly informative for people who'd like to start learning about astronomy/astrophysics or want to refresh their basic knowledge about it.

Legau liked , of a note in my also

takes long to load and some text parts are out of view.
interesting and seems legit.

Good idea, needs work.
AS its still a bit on the not finished side of things, it lacks music and it has just text after clicking.

Might wanna try and make this a little cooler and it will pass judgement as right now its okay but not great.

Loved it!

Credits & Info

Views
2,895
Faves:
1
Votes
150
Score
2.35 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 16, 2015
4:51 PM EST
Genre
Tutorial