Too Short + No sound = Bad Grade
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The feeling that we all get expressed in a more simpler manner.
Shivayya responds:
This was my first one .
Let me try those things on my other shorts.
Hey,
That morphing animation is suhweeet!
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- Ziro out.
Shivayya responds:
Thank You
dear Shivayya
Animation looks good enough. And how come it looks like he's living in a Simpson's Household?
There was a major flaw in this one. It would've been funnier if it had SFX and music associated with this. Yeah you just have to put that in and it would get significantly funnier. But that's just my opinion. At least I understand what you're going for here but the lack of sound FX makes it look dull. Despite that this has the potential to reach the portal.
PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions
Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton
Shivayya responds:
well thanks for the advice i will definitely consider your points for my next work.
Pretty great animation, and art style. But I do recommend Swivel so your animation is not on loop. It's free so it should be no problem to get. With that said, keep it up!
Shivayya responds:
I will look into it.
Thank You