In past november I made this for a contest and I didnt know what to do with it.. so i decided post it here and wait for some critics and I be able to see things that maybe i didnt see before.
-Sorry,Some texts are in spanish but you will to understand the animation( I hope)
-Not sound
I would add some audio in, but I really liked the animation. Maybe work on solid drawing people (look for proko on youtube). That bell breaking joke though, absolutely hilarious, just when I thought the animation might have looped that rock came in. Good job! I can't give any tips on the story because I can't read Spanish but I still understood it (I think.)
Thanks. I appreciate it
Buena trama. sigue asi.
Gracias
Quite good. Poignant and well animated.
It's so damn quiet, though. I'd suggest checking out the Audio Portal for some background music.
Good advice, thanks.