The animation is a little weird. The story is just okay but I don't know if drama is subjective just like humor but this did not feel like drama. So in conclusion, you need to work on your 3D animation and make it a little bit more dramatic.
Last year I started a new 4 year during 3D animation studie. This is my first year film.
Writing, pre visualizing and fine-tuning the story took about 10 weeks. In the remaining 7 weeks I spend about 185 hours on the production.
The film is almost fully hardware renderd in Maya's viewport 2.0.
Hope you enjoy it!
The animation is a little weird. The story is just okay but I don't know if drama is subjective just like humor but this did not feel like drama. So in conclusion, you need to work on your 3D animation and make it a little bit more dramatic.