masterpiss

I want to start by apologizing in advance for anything I say that might offend you.
That said, here's my review.
I really thought it was bad. I couldn't really get into it. Even satire requires quite a bit of effort.
While I can commend your effort to create something for the enjoyment of others, You could have done so much more with it.
And the spelling errors? An awful choice. I was expecting to laugh, not lose brain cells.You can still achieve the same entertainment without murdering the english language. If you do make something like this in the future, please consider taking the time to spell things correctly. I promise you get better reviews when people can comprehend the stupidity a bit better. Even troll logic would be better than dialogue that sounds like fanfiction written by a 5th-grade student that's failing in english.

this made me wanna kill myself x-x

how dore yu mike christ bi, i h8 yu!!1!11!1! now for the real thing, I personally liked it alot, and I really think this was good. I have never heard of diary of luna but I'm probably gonna be checking it out now, thanks again and if you ever plan on releasing the next chapter, know that I will be waiting in my basement with my potato computer.

Horrible. . . Just horrible. The English is so bad it's unreadable. The controls don't work that well, and even finding the first door is incredibly hard since you can't even tell where it is. Starting at the beginning fight scene it is hard to figure out the fighting mechanics even knowing the controls.
Bleh.