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Nice work here

So you have some nice work here the animation alone just flows with easy and ever so smooth and thats what I really enjoyed about this piece so nice work there, Ok so I have gathered that you know what you are doing here there could be a few changes along the way a here and there, But I do like what you have going on here, its good on all fronts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe different colored paper would be one idea but not needed as much.

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This plot sure seems a bit familiar... guess it might be one of the ones that had a new rendition made for it later on! Wonder if it's intentional or no, a classic bettered, or an idea that just came again at random... either way good stuff, though the newer one did indeed seem a bit better.

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This is a series of animated cliches, I did not laugh once, not because it wasn't funny, but because I have seen EVERY bit in this video several times before.

Also, the girl hit the guy with her right hand, but he has a left-hand print on his RIGHT cheek.

wish your stuff appeared on TV. So good. You might even get more noticed.