While the animation does need some work I found this over all to be quite charming. Keep at it!
This is an audio file my Sister made and now I decided to upload it to newgrounds. I animated it on Scratch with my profile of Altofeather (https://scratch.mit.edu/users/Altofeather) and it shows a Bolt Dog I made myself.
This might be a little slow on Newgrounds and faster on scratch and it might lag. Scratch version is here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/212892508/