Notbad

So this was a decent little short you have here character work was well done, it was a bit short I could see you making it longer and I notice it had a loop on it maybe thats something you can fix and if its flash you are using then a stop action code would be perfect for that not everyone uses flash anymore though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things suggested above.

~X~

A fiery punch! Though could use something more. Some story. Some fight. Something wholesome.

-cd-