Too much dialog, not enough action. If there was a skip button for the dialog I would rate higher. I actually got bored not even from reading, just from skipping the dialog. I understand wanting there to be a story but maybe it could be told at the beginning with a skip option or have more action with dialog.
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The Journey - Part 1: The Awakening
is the first in a series of short visual novels which will tell the story of Blaze. He wakes up in a land where there are castles, knights elves and much more.
In part 1 you will get to know the characters a bit better and get the first few story beats. Which part 2 (and maybe more parts) will build upon.
I hope you will enjoy this short visual novel and the beginning of a new adventure!
Visuart
*The music used in the game is called Adventure from Bensound.com