not bad
Add some sound, sharpen the drawings, and slow down the text a little bit and you mite have a great flash movie. Keep working at it.
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Hi guys its me again, once again i WILL Apologise for no sound, but there is a notice at the end of this episode.
if ur interested in what it sez you can catch me on the address at the end.
Making a fighting animation at this very moment.
Comments/tips & Suggestions are Appriciated
Cya all hope you enjoy it.
Dtok
((( NICE WORK )))
Hey you have come along way, yes sound would make it alot better, and you know you could do it as you also have the audio music talents, anyways i really like some of the effects used, i really like the ship design, this was a overall great film and love the story aswell, cant wait for more dtok classics...
~X~
next 1 with sound plzz
it was good but with sound it is better
Too bad it was silent.
Otherwise it would have been a good flash. You have an impressive animation style. My question is why you didn't add any sound after putting all that effort into the rest of the flash. Not only that, but the text explaining the story faded away too quickly; I had a difficult time reading it. Next time add sound!
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