Seems self aware, so is this supposed to be a parody? If so, where's the satire? It feels like you are trying to mock stoner humor here; but without any irony or insight, it just becomes the thing it's attempting to make fun of.

not a very good pitch tbh, the art is good. dont get me wrong, but everything in this seems like it's already been done before. the characters seem one sided and it just lacks charm, and overall just has an uninteresting premise.