I don't think I could give you a good assessment with what I have to work with here. The outlining seems nice, but there isn't enough dialogue for me to really latch on to and understand the setting and story.
So I say go for it!
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Waterfall from Grace episode 1 WIP
Might decide whether to continue this based on feedback