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Neurotically Yours EP 2 (Audio Comic Book Series)

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It's the comic book! With SOUND!

Foamy & Pilz-E are looking for Sue Z. June.


(I'll roll some of these episodes out every so often. Some folks don't like the "island series" style, but it's something I still like working so I'll probably work on comics for the series rather than animated episodes, and then make audio comics at some point.) I'm picky so that's subject to change :)


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Foamy's Podcast is also on Spotify

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Though the dialog may not be all backed with punchlines and fine wit, as I seem to have been spoiled with during the old days, these aren't bad... fun to follow the story, though you really can do so almost just as well with audio only. An audio version of this might be nice. Could play in the background as you do other things.

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Nice work!

Is her language Abyssal? I think it's Abyssal.

Anyway, glad to finally learn how they found Sue Z. June and looking forward to more updates!

So that's how they got to the island, and he is right we can't understand her... yet. I'll start learning how to speak in hellish tongues and work my way up to her, cursed tongues here I come.

Not another comic dub!

This is a comic dub, although you're calling it a 'Comic book with SOUND'. Same thing.

Months ago, I made a thread complaining about uploading comic dubs to Newgrounds. I said that they generally take less time and effort than a regular animation made at a similar skill level. Even less if they didn't create the comic themselves and just used a pre-existing one. As a result, the Movie Guidelines were changed to reflect that.

"Comic Dubs: This is an evolving area. If you are simply adding audio over static images from an existing comic, please refrain from sharing it here. If you have created a motion comic that introduces elements of animation along with audio, you can share it here but only if the artist themselves has an NG account and is co-authored on the piece. Please rate your entry appropriately; this category has been under much scrutiny after several misrated Adult comic dubs won daily awards. Rate your entry Adult if it contains nudity and sexual situations."

while Tom Fulp said:
"Comic Dubs should require the comic artist to be co-authored with an NG account and also require the "Opt out of Awards" box to be checked."

So, how does this Foamy 'Audio Comic' stand up? Well, there's barely any lewd stuff in this, and you pretty much created everything here, the comic itself, the audio, and most of the voices, with some from Dawn, a voice actor you worked with for many years, but I didn't really see a lot of motion.
I assume you've opted out of awards in this episode, since you said you opted out in the first episode:
"Also opting out of awards here on this as I kinda don't feel like it's "animation" or whatever. :P"

Also, I want to point out that you just started doing that when you reposted the old Foamy episodes here from 2018-2020 and got backlash for constant Daily award winning. And with these 'audio comics' skirting past the Guidelines, I could see this getting messy at some point down the line.

Graphics: 4 | Style: 7 | Sound: 10 | Writing: 7 | Humor: 8
Overall Score: 6

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