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I was pretty hesitant to post this BUT i shall do it anyway as this is my only way to continue to document my progress. Anyway here it is my 2nd ever animation (this time with sound effects and music O.O) once again i go over and above my abilities because getting mf's to just walk is annoying.


I could tear this apart but my biggest issues with it so far are:

  1. The cinematography leaves a lot to be desired: I thought i had a fairly decent understanding of camera work and how to get nice shots but i just can't implement it well. I have my homework on shows and fight scenes to research and look into how their camerawork is and try to learn better techniques from there.
  2. Inconsistency: I have always been really bad at this even back into my childhood with music. I will just have one really good scene and that a bunch of mid tier ones and the some shit ones. And that is evident here. The only way to fix this is by more practice duh.
  3. Poor models: now i'm still new to modeling to but it just got a little frustrating with the amount of clipping and mesh distortion i had to fix along the way. some is still present if you look close enough. Once again the only way to fix that is to practice making more models and getting better with it as time goes on.


Either way i am happy that i was able to come up with something that doesn't look like complete dog shit. BUT i definitely have a long way to go before i can start on my dream project of making my own show. One step at a time though and soon i will get there.


Stay tuned for more progress updates and sorry for ranting!

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Imma slap a "Waiting for more" sticker on this.

Good work dude, high potential here!

it is commendable that you can analyze your work, you are a great fellow)I will advise you to be less critical of yourself, do it first of all for the soul. if the story is interesting, you can omit a couple of errors in the animation. Good luck

i don't like much animes and specially this one,but i may for obligation,needs to get better.

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Uploaded
Feb 25, 2023
7:10 PM EST
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Action