You put a lot of effort into this and making a 6 minute short is no small feat, but the animation is stiff and the pacing too slow. It doesn't flow naturally. Excellent lip syncing, though. And the best jokes were probably the very first one (the reference to the looney toons and the one when he unexpectedly explodes).
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A serious case of Gang Green
Facko-Newgrounds responds:
The reason why the animation is stiff is cause there were a lot of stuff that prevented me from dedicating the proper time to animate, like school.
So that's why, and I'm hoping that if i ever get a chance to work on the next episode, I'll try my best to at least add a little more frames.
Zah really done said "Bad morning"
Facko-Newgrounds responds:
Bad Morning indeed
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3.73 / 5.00
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Daily 4th Place March 4, 2024
