Nice animation with good movement. I like it when you can see LY visibly get angry if you take too long answer. However, I feel confused by what is going on. The fluidity of your animation is good, with nice tweening. I feel it ended quite fast without a proper conclusion, but it gives a good picture of what your web series is about, although I am genuinely confused about what is happening. I find the character designs difficult to read. It starts out very fast, and I wish there was some quick explanation of what world they are in, as I feel that the narrative of the story is not properly explained to the viewer.

The length of this animation is pretty impressive, but it's flawed several times over. The dialogue is pretty broken in terms of grammar and it's not especially clear what the plot is. The subtitles and pauses also slow the animation way down and make it a bit tedious (some voice acting, even Speakonia, would have made this feel a bit faster.) At the same time, a lot of the animation loops (like the wings flapping) happen way too fast and the quality of animation just isn't there. Especially for a looping animation the audience will see over and over, it would be a good idea to put some more time (and frames) into loops like these even if you have to cut corners on other parts.

Nice drawings, but I think it could be better with a background change and pause-play buttons to carefully read the texts. Also, nice drawings but they also need more detail