Rating this half a star higher because it reminds me of the old flash MX animations that made newgrounds great. Also, it actually has a plot unlike a lot of shorts I see. Another full star for using music from the Audio Portal. As a producer myself, I love to see NG artists getting support and exposure in all ways!

I think that the animation could of course use improvement, minimizing any scenes where there is just a white background. With your character style, you can ofc incorporate photos and so on for the backgrounds and maybe even objects. Think images with transparency backgrounds. That may not be possible in the software you're using. Idk what it is -- flash ofc, but which one!

But anyway, thanks for writing me. A NG animation in my inbox was a nice surprise :)

Not bad! The animation is a bit crude, although I like the plot, and the music fits in well. I think the park/city main street scenery is drawn particularly well. Keep it up, flashmakeit! :)

Not bad. Animation's improving.

Heeey thanks for using my music in this! :D It fits in too, a fun date, adversity turned to a good time... and then reality comes knocking again huh. XD Though since it cuts before anything happens at the end one can hope they made it out of the situation unscathed, hopefully not based on any real experiences....

Bit interesting how the ground morphs in the beginning, as she's riding the bike, after that landscapes seem a bit more realistic. :)

Good fun; nice surprise with the music!

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