The basic, seconds-long loop rendered incomprehensible by going way too fast.
I can see an obvious point of improvement in the endscreen - you should've stopped the movie once it hit the "The End" frame and provided a button to replay the movie.
I know NewGrounds is looking for some new material but I have to do my best since you guys all rule so much! Hope you like this short of mine.
The basic, seconds-long loop rendered incomprehensible by going way too fast.
I can see an obvious point of improvement in the endscreen - you should've stopped the movie once it hit the "The End" frame and provided a button to replay the movie.