cool good work my friend

Not bad, at all!
For the test, this is alright. The story is a bit weird, but has potential. For grammar and animation, I think you already know. The music is also in dire needs of fixing.
But with a few changes there and here, it can turn into some nice animation!
If you need something specific, just ask in my mail!

That was fire

I clicked this expecting a cooking show! Really, the warning at the start should have tipped me off, but i was hoping for italian.