I like the character designs! You seem to be a great artist. Though the writing can be a little too fast paced and under written to the point where some jokes won’t either land or a scene can end up coming off as random. (Which if that’s the point then more power to ya) just think u can do better either way with writing this one. Also not really a fan of the AI voices not knocking points for that as I understand voice actors aren’t easy to come by but I do think it would’ve been better had the characters had voices. I understand the technical process but I do think the writing isn’t anything that can be excused. But I do see the hunger. And even though I said the writing can be a little random that didn’t stop me from overall enjoying this one. It made me entertained and I can’t wait to see more. Next time COOK!! CCCCOOOOKKKKK!!!
Unprofessional Behavior (PART 1)
I wanna upload this short animated movie as a "part 1" so i can see what the audience thinks about my project!
Oh well,let me know guys what you think about it!
I started working on this in June 2024.
The story is based upon my own comic book series called "Unprofessional Behavior" which started back in 2018.
Alot of ideas changed,some for good,some for bad :(
Also excuse the animation style as at first,it started as a "5 minute joke".
At first i wanted to make it a short 5 minute video since people asked me alot about the lore of the entire story,but the lenght increased each day i worked on it!
So nothing special!
Voices were done with the help of ElevenLabs!
I had to use it since its hard to come by voice actors who are willing to work in such a silly project.
Anyway,thank you guys for watching!
(P.S. The ending was finally edited and modified!)
Thank you so much for the review!!❤️
Also,noted!
huh. the length does this a disservice. its a general dump of whats basically a straight shot storyboard. Not overly interesting and just keeps going. The animation style would be better, shorter.
The character designs are interesting though, and does pique some interest, but the set up is all over the place.
Thank you for letting me know!