yea once again

it was good but all of a sudden you stopped. so for what was there I'll give you a 6 cause it was good so far. but it needed to be finished I hope there's more on the next one you made

You should of finished this

It looked liked you had something good starting, but, then it just ends. What was the point in submitting this unfinished piece? By the way, I liked your black in white style.
-MB5

Looking Good Man...

I'll drop a line and another review when you're done. Peace

It's better, but...

I think the addition of one new scene aren't enough to justify re-submitting.. This get's a two, and it gets a two because it's not bad enough to blam, yet there are 3 of these, slightly differing from each other...

I don't know if I mentioned this in my review for 1.0, but it takes too damn long for Coreleone to walk in the house... waaay too long. Nice improvement, but not enough, ya know? Sorry.

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make it move faster it took way too long for michael to get to the stupid house. Your movie should not be as long as the godfather. oh, and so far its booooooring!