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Well what a cool short story. I thought that the graphics were good, i mean your character designs for the clocks were good, what i do think that could have been done to improve on your effort would be the use of animation instead of just random pictures with slight movement. But that doesnt take away from this piece, the music choice for the background was good, on another notei would have liked to have seen the subs in maybe a clean box at the bottom of the window. The highlight of your piece would have had to have been your humour you nailed the jokes.
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