Finally Something Good for once!
I have been reviewing music and I finally find something that desrves my 5 and 10! I love your work.
Your singing sounds a little off key but that can be easily fixed. Also you could lift it up a bit. You sound kinda half dead. like your tired or something.
But other than that, you've got musical tallent! Keep up your work and you will make something people will be proud to call...perfect!