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Should be in the top five again!
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Reviews for "-Emotion Burst locomotion"
Waterflame responds:
thanks ^^ but it wont be cuz someone just zero'ed it for no aperant reason Y-Y
I think I like this. :D
Nice feeling here - funny that sinspike says it should be slower, I think it's pretty slow in the beginning, compared to your other stuff. :P
I hear FL Keys - or possibly some other widely available free piano thing - throughout the song, I'm not so sure about it... :\ It's really recognizable to those of us who use FL Studio and even some people who don't, but have heard it enough times to know it. You left it really recognizable, too... come on, you can do better than that. ;D
I really like that distorted synth that plays on the first beat and the second offbeat of the first measure of every four measures in some parts! :D A bit of a long, specific sentence, but you get the idea. :P Point is, I ALWAYS like to hear synths like that in a song - it's a personal taste thing and I think it's awesome. :P The bass synth is also awesome, I just noticed it, and no complaints - really good and original-sounding. ;)
Vocals at 1:04 sounded a bit random, to me... :\ The song didn't really need them, in my opinion.
Composition is great, instruments are great - together, they make a slightly video-gamish feel. :P Drums are, as always, first-rate... do I hear some panning in them? o_O Because my right headphone is making just a little bit more noise drumwise than my left now and then... ah, well, it's all great. The ride (or is that some kind of an open hihat? It's on the offbeat) introduced midway through the song is good, though you did some weird gating stuff... you should have just let it play! ;D
That's about all I've got to say, great job with this one. :D 9/10, 5/5, and a download - keep it up. And congrats on weekly 1st with Control: Crowd! :D
Waterflame responds:
Haha yeah i guess youre right about the FLkeys, but tbh ive never found any piano like thats better. i have only ONE vst and thats the magical 8bit :(
thanks for the long and awesome review :D i found this review verry helpfull aswell! (lol *clicks the yes down below*) again, thanks! :)
ehh
needs work. a slower tempo would b nice
Waterflame responds:
thats a matter of taste i beleve.. i dont like slow songs, therefore i make fast ones. and you need to specify what excatly needs work... cause if i find the song to be ok, how should i fix it by working on a issue i dont know what is o.O
Good!
But too happy for my taste.....
bit repetitive, but otherwise, very good.
Waterflame responds:
Thank you :D im not sure if i agree with it beeing that repetitive concidering its length/melody variations, but im glad you find it to be an ok production :D and yeah, might be too "happy go lucky" for most pepole. i agree :P but i dunno, something about this style just has me, forever. <3
real trippy
I agree with WritersBlock, I'm liking the upbeat style of this tune, definetly lots of energy this track gives off. Jumpy drums sound real nice, I like the violin and piano in combination with the synths, nice stuff. Melodies are real happy and catchy and flow quite swell with the bassline. Progresses real nice, section at 2:10 was a good addition, gives room for tension to build up once you hit back with the chorus. I just think the last chorus could place more emphasis on new riff if you were aiming for that to be the focal point of the track. Conclusion was wrapped up quite well.
Mixing job is near excellent in my opinion, I just think the piano sounded a bit cheap, just need some thickness and a more defined sound. I'm not too fond of the poppy techno sound here, but very cool track regardless!
Waterflame responds:
a intelegent and nice review :D thank you for the constructive criticicm! i actually agree with your points . infact all of them :P and im glad you took the time to give a serious review altho youre not really into this style. thats the worst mistake pepole usually do, judge the songs after personal taste. again thanks! :D