i voted a 5
because the sound was the best ive heard on newgrounds, dude if u can get good graphics into it, itll be amazing
i voted a 5
because the sound was the best ive heard on newgrounds, dude if u can get good graphics into it, itll be amazing
Some advice...
Draw the sticks a little better, they're kind of long and flat, and it would be nice if you used real voices, instead of text. I think you did really well on sound.
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u just gave my a great flash idea....but its alil more cynical and more humorous, i like the jedi shit, especially since i play the games and what not...keep it up
Hmmm... not bad.
Nothing really stands out in my mind for improvement, other than to continue with it and make it longer. Thought I think the 25 years ago at the beginning can be left out unless you want to start off with anouther scene. If that is your opening scene, take it off and just leave the 25 years later afterwords. And you should think about making the red guy more sinister, Give him a cape or something.
ok here it goes
i think and this is just 1 guys opinion but i think you should make characters and you should get a sound recording software i think that thatll help you alot