HMMMMM
That was good would ahve been alot lot better if it were longer it was on ofr about 20secs make it longer you have a good film on your hands
HMMMMM
That was good would ahve been alot lot better if it were longer it was on ofr about 20secs make it longer you have a good film on your hands
Nice Work
You shouldnt censor the language. Add voices if you can, and try to get more detailed on the story. "Do you have any links" was a good line instead of using something lame like "clues" one more thing, I dont know if your good enough to or not, but try not to keep the characters behind things so we can only see shadows, that kinda sucks (sept for first part that was cool)
You can do better man...
Not a geek in this stuff of flash but it would've been kool if it wasnt that short but at the same time that was kewl bekause you left me wayting for the next episode but try and make the other episode i bit more longer plz it would be more interesting
I like
It's ok.
You need to work on the glass window shattering. It wouldn't break the entire thing, just leave a bullet hole in it from a high-velocity round.
Also, i think having better forms that just shadows would be cool.
Good music choice tho.
Not bad
I like the music