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Reviews for "War of the Muffins (Cpt1)"

HAHAHAHAHA!

HAHAHAHAHA! That was so bad it was good, i gave it a five! keep this crap comin i need some more laffs!

Freetospeak responds:

Arighty. I will.

Not bad

It is always good to see a fellow muffin make a movie, and not to have the movie completely suck monkey balls. I was a little upset that you refered to my test as crap, but whatever. My only criticisms are the voice acting in the begining was a little weird, it seemed like you were making up the dialouge on the spot, and I think there shoulda been a Booger Muffin instead of a James Bond Muffin. Overall, it was a good movie, keep up the good work.

Freetospeak responds:

Wow! Thanks alot. Yeah I did make up the speach on the spot. I don't think i'll have the brefing like that again. Anyways if you still want to send me the questions have ater. my msn is toobit122@msn.com.

Wow, you've improved alot!

Noticed you changed your name too :P
I like this one, sure beats the crap out of the my world madness. Try thes, when you're animating something, highlight the frames between the tweens and look in the properties, try out the ease setting, ease out will make the animation slow down at the end of a tween and easing in does the opposite, speed up.
Continue the great work!
And I like the clock crew and the muffins....omg! I love and hate myself! Like the CC more though :P

Freetospeak responds:

Wow thanks! I always like reading your reveiws! Seems you are my number 1 critic! Thanks again.

Couple of things:

FIRSTLY:
Direct quotes from the (very boring, try having some TV screens of surveillance of the base or something while he talks) briefing
"The clock crew is winning the war, but im sure we can win it." I mean, come one, thats just lame.
"have a win." Victory sounds better.
"its all on the - Its all on the briefing sheet." Please, if you make a mistake, re-do it, dont continue that bit.

Also, put the briefing in some more formal looking text.

Anyway:

GRAPHICS: nicely done, tho the muffin in the begining looks pretty blocky, and trace an uzi/ak47/all guns on onion skin, dont use an actual picture, it looks real lame. The Helicopter looks lame also, but the clocks and james bond muffin are very well drawn.
STYLE: WOOO MUFFINS JAMES BOND CAN YOU DO ANY BETTER:D:D:D:D
SOUNDS: nice music, but the breifing voice is really crap.
VIOLENCE: well, its a violent movie. 'nuff said.
INTERACVTIVITY: Well, not much, just a couple o continue buttons.
HUMOUR: hehe he pissed his pants :D

OVERALL: VERY GOOD, BUT YOU COUD'VE ACTUALLY JOINED THE CLAN FIRST :) and change it to james bond muffin, now you're no longer booger muffin.

Freetospeak responds:

Haha the brefing was as boring as ur reveiw. JKJK. lol thank for the reveiw anyways. And I can always use some good advise.

that was cool , but need more to keep interest

u should have givin more, i really hope u have a sequel to back that up, good job , ur doin fine

Freetospeak responds:

I am to lazy.