excellent job
i was really impressed with how u made ur characters show real emotion that was cool
and you couldnt have picked a bettter song to go with it that song really added to the movie perfectly
tips and ideas
have 2 guys beat each ohter up then go out for beeers
have cop chasing a badguy catch him and him and his cop buddies beat him down
then have it caught on cam by someone with a cam and shows him running to the media who are like holy shit!@@