quite impressive for ur first one
good theme, the music works will, should extend it tho, the aliens didnt seem to take long to get in, but pretty good graphics, ill give it a 3/5 keep it up man, look forward to ur future flashes
Reviews for "Legion I"
Great job! Excellent choice of music!
You picked the perfect music for the mood, but the aliens got in too early..perhaps you should extend it? And for number 2, be sure to improve the graphics from stick figures to actual people. :D
that was pretty freaking good man!
just a couple things, make there heads a tiny bit off there shoulders, then have the heads a little bit bigger, that was freaking awesom can't wait till the others come out man, you have me intrigued **however**
Not bad
WEll first you should give thanks to DJ Hercio, he is the one that did the music, also, i dontthink you shoud have teh ships stal when they fire.
Other than that, good job.
Interesting...
The Good: The music set the mood.
What needs work: Slow down the frame rate. You couldn't see half of the space battle because it zoomed by. Also, make the ships for each race be unique. If they look the same, it's hard to know who is who. Also, make the battles more in depth. One shot shouldn't be all it takes to kill a ship or a person. Dodging and what not should be involved and make fighters spew out for several rapid waves to kill the motherships. You didn't know how many ships were chasing the first so after that one died and the guy was like, "one down, we don't need additional ships" you had no idea how many were after "one down".
Also, make your style of speech more military sounding. Instead of, "Send out the fighters, now" make it something like, "Launch the Fighters, ASAP"
All in all, I liked it and I want to see more, but you need to work on the details a bit.
I personally like stick figure movies so I say keep them.