very good
this is the kinda dark stuff that is missing on newgrounds not that smile shit
Reviews for "A Dark Place (First Set)"
Ring-Wraith responds:
Thank you for your feedback. Yes, I know it's a comic, not a flash animation. I was just curious how people would respond to me having my comic as a flash slide showish kinda thing. Sorry the text is small! Though I dont feel posting it with a few improvements will make a big deal. The graphics dont look very good because I had to "Trace Bitmap" the actual JPEGS. If you do like the comic, click on my site under my Author Name. That takes you to the direct comic site. I havent updated in a while however. Again, thanks for all of your input! ^.^
nice but
it was too small, i couldnt really read it without going like UUUHHH???? :) cnat you make it bigger?
beautifully dark
It's more of a comic than a flash. Please make the pictures and words bigger. I had to zoom in just to read. It's hard to figure out what is going on but hopefully all will be explained in your next comic. I'll be looking for it.
unique...and I love it!
Interesting new piece of work. You totally took it into a new direction by doing it in a comic form rather than flash and thats great, deff thinking outside the box their. I love comics the way you portray them, the only problems I encountered was that some of the text is too small so if you can make them a little bigger that would be perfect. Also the music was great but it stopped after a while which kinda downed my score for you :-/. Other than that its great unique and I'm totally looking forward to the next!
Extremely odd...
I'll start off by being fair and reviewing it based on the fact that it's a comic, rather than an interesting flash animation, which is what Newgrounds is looking for.
The graphics inside the comic were horrible, it looked like you drew it with Paint and touched it up with Photoshop, then distorted the backround. The storyline was stupid; I had no idea what was going on, there wasn't enough comics to show anything interesting happen.
This is a poor excuse for a flash animation on newgrounds, and I suggest not placing the Second Set on here.