No sound
This was a very good movie, but sound would have made this a lot better, my only other problem was that the "speech bubbles" faded away too soon. But it had great animation and I liked the plot.
Reviews for "ox6 episode 2"
Great again, but
PLEASE SLOW DOWN THE TEXT!!
My Two...
Honestly, though I can tell you're against it, I can promise you that sound would greatly help your flash. I watched it and enjoyed it, though the total silence did kind of bother me. Your art is really pretty good, though there were a few "shots" that didn't seem shaded while others were shaded. If you get the time you should shade any picture that's going to show up for more than 1/20th of a second. One last criticism, the way you did the text boxes made some of them a little hard to read. Not all of them, but some of the more wordy ones would turn too transparent by the time I finished the second line or so, so I missed half the story in this flash =\
But it's a cool flash and I look forward to more of your work. Keep it up man.
Nice artwork...
...but work on your timing. I'm a pretty fast reader, but I still can't keep up with the text before it's faded out.
once again, you sure can draw.
this is turning into one hell of a series mate. the graphics are amazing, and the story line is very deep, and also excellent.
~you say: "It's also very unlikely I will include sound in the future.
Just a matter of keeping the size as small as humanly possible."
~I SAY::: dude, the file size is under 250kB as it is now!! 10 or more sound effects in the movie will not increase it by all that much at ALL. Trust me, you dont need to worry about the filesize, its already tiny, and your movies would largely benefit from some sound effects, so put some in, damn it!!
you have awesome graphics and animation, now all you need is sound. no more excuses, you have to put them in!
overall score: 7/10 **= 8 if there was sound**
(THE THUMB: UP!!!)