First flash
I'll admit, I'm getting tired of the whole "abstract-flash-cartoon-that-makes-no-sense" clique used in a lot of flash cartoons lately.. but I mean, for a first flash.. the shit was pretty fucking superb.
Reviews for "No Clockwork Ep.1"
cardim responds:
You gave me an 8...
Bless your soul! SERIOUSLY! I've been gettin 5's and 3's these past few days!
Yay! You used my song!
You are the first and only person that has used one of my audio submissions, it really goes well with this animation. I like it alot. You have a very unique style, I don't see how you have such a low score!
cardim responds:
Well, its pretty cool to get an 8 on my first flash from a flash legend. thanks, man.
Alright
Its a bit weird but the animations are good so I gave it a three
what a shame
nice drawings i thought, except for the school, all these thick, curved lines and then a perfectly angled narrow lined school, a big contrast dont you think, perhaps you want to work on storyline. I liked the fact it was in black and white, perhaps it would look good in future flashes to put the odd thing in colour, just for show, and no i dont mean blood! it doesnt always have to be blood.
needs work
This could have used some sort of background. It looked very plain, without one. You seem to do very odd work over all I watched your other works before this. I would actually like you totry to do a flash with a story line. I think you could really do a good job if you tried..