very cool
i lke the way u animated, the story is very realistic, and also the moral is good.
very cool
i lke the way u animated, the story is very realistic, and also the moral is good.
Nice
You can use this flash as a message for people who do drugs
cheesey and very euro
it's a good piece. you're going to get a lot of low scores from ppl who are sick of anti-drug propaganda, but don't worry about it.
Still, beyond your message, there were a lot of things you could have done to make this better that you didn't.
Aged 27 should be Age 27
Junuior should be Junior
Why is the guy and his friend in their room raving?
They should have been in a club.
It sort of dragged along. You sort of made your point early in the flash and then just kept saying it and saying it and saying it.
"BTW, this story isn't true." Yeah, we all knew that. Those of us who didn't know that aren't smart enough to care.
Overall a good piece, but it coud have been made much better.
Wow
The moral of the story was very good.
There should have been more talking though.
Keep up the good work.
Pretty good, there were some good and bad parts.
This was overall, a pretty well constructed piece of flash. This sends a good message out to the people that do drugs, you portrayed it in a pretty good way, I am sure people will look at this and a lightbulb will go off in their head! The interesting thing, is that the graphics were very well done for a five day span. THe sound was also commendable it fit well in most places! I will look forward to more submissions by you in the future! Keep up the good work!
-Jamie