WOW!
That was an awesome cartoon man! Keep doing what you're doing. I look forward to a lot more from you! ^_^
Reviews for "VG Wars: Episode #1"
dude awesome
that was excellent dude nice sprite work and i want u 2 make more ok? lol ;)
I see potential
I think you can do some good stuff along this thread... but there are some things you need to do to make it better.
First and foremost... please, please, PLEASE make it faster! It seemed like all I was doing the entire time was waiting for the next speech bubble or fight move to come... WAY too slow paced. Also, pay a little more attention to details... ie. make sure and capitalize Mario, make sure Luigi's blue beam thingy goes in front of the Toads, not behind; and if a row of boxes is falling, make sure it falls all the way, not stop kind of crooked in mid-air. On the whole, though, I think you've got some potential with this idea.
good
nice animation but it seemed to take like 5 minutes to get the movie goin, and i lost intrest
UBER LAZY REVIEW!
im doing a really lazy review cause i dont have a lot of time but i need to get an important message accross... the action needs to be faster. its a really easy problem to fix... your action is WAAAAAAAAAAAY too slow! make the action frames farther apart... it'll be a lot more entertaining. This animation could have made it on the front page if the action speed were a lot faster.