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Reviews for "[RG] Longing"

Now this is awesome...

It kind of has like a dark Mexican feel to it, if there is such a 'feel.' the beat in this one is better then in the last song i heard by you. Epic riff on those strings, the lp filter on that drum break was amazing. I thought that the crash cymbals around 2:08 were a little lonely. The Rhodes type keys that you used I thought was one of the greatest additions to this piece. I think I like this one a little more then the happy happy upbeat song. I think you should add in another cello/contra bass to help out that one cello at parts. Not to much hear that I can pick up on that needs adjustments. That choir reminded me of "Legends of the Hidden Temple" i don't know why. Anyways, nice job and keep up the good work.

5/5
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Ritheguardian responds:

thnx, yeah, I've been listening to it and i've been finding somethings myself that need lots of improvment, i agree, the clash symbols are lonely, but i can't quite figure our something to put with them.... and i figured a slight "cello duet" for the cello parts that are alone. Thnx for you advise :)

Wow

Love the song especially at 1:13 when the sound of the song just changed completely. It was unexpected and completely awesome

Ritheguardian responds:

Thnx very much :) def. my fav part in the song aswell :)

I really like this

This is awesome. 5/5

wow

a real sense of building throughout it, which is excellent, though may have to be edited if used in flash movies so bits came in the right places to fit the mood.
It's got a good general feel to it, the string soudns aren't bad either if they're from fruity loops! I'm not sure i like how it ends particularly, it sounds a little abrupt. Maybe just add a definate ending, or make it loop. Otherwise a nice song.
One thing i just noticed was the sudden loss of texture when the high melody comes in, maybe keep a few more soudns going?
Great song mate, good luck in the future.

Ritheguardian responds:

Thanks, hopefully one of my pieces would eventually be used in flash, but i don't really mind, i enjoi making music, but i will take you advise, i was working on editing this song, making it long and adding more beats and a bigger build up :) and of course a better end

nice melody

another good one, im gonna be looking foward for some new of yours now, this song could be even greater if the main melody violin was volumed down a bit or maybe in kind of a more echo distant sound, but hey thats just me ;)
keep doing!

Ritheguardian responds:

Yeah, after listening to it over and over, i realized that it's a BIT over played, and a tad too loud. I've fixed that now, but I'm waiting for a little more feedback till i re-submit. thnx 4 the listen, glad you're a fan :)