Joe Camel Z
The fighting is awesome
a little choppy but still pretty smooth
all you need is some backgrounds and some soundFX
and oh yeah....a plot
Joe Camel Z
The fighting is awesome
a little choppy but still pretty smooth
all you need is some backgrounds and some soundFX
and oh yeah....a plot
thanks a bunch for the comments and advice, and i'll work on that whole plot thing
lissen
i demand you make more of this...because i like very much!!!
Not bad
Put a background in, sound fx, maybe more of a plot and make it longer and it would be great
thanks for the comments, and i'll work on the other stuff in my other animations
Not half bad
This seems to show some potential. It wasn't great animation wise, and lacked completely in story line, but for what was there it shows that if improved it could be quite impressive. More fluid animation, perhaps a plot, and some better music/sound, and you could have some pretty good ratings.
thanks for the comments and advice, and i'll try to work what you suggested
a good start
show some great potential. the charater are good. but it need a story and the sound could be better hope you keep at it. hope to see a new verson soon
hey thanks alot, if i continue this, the story will be further explained in a later clip