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Very horrible.
Graphics were decent.
Some parts were too plain though.
Reviews for "Control: A Research Paper"
urapbad responds:
Oh I mwas wondering why u said very horrible and gave me a 10!
lol u mean what's happening is very horrible, yeah what to do? what to do?
good and evil in this world, evils more interesting though.
derrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrf
i eat all ur babies
DEBATE THAT FOOL!
urapbad responds:
well eating all my babies would seem to be impossible since i dont have any there for I win
Neat
This is the wrong website to submit a paper to due to many of the mindless people here wanting to see porn or violence, but you did a good job coming up with a creative way to present a report.
urapbad responds:
PORN VIOLENCE Where?
Dude it's obvious porn and violence bet this any day, i'm just glad if i can compete with it at all.
...
Alright, so...
I'm going to look at this las it is meant to be viewed, apparantly enither commically or as a convetional flash, and come up with something according to that.
First off, congrats on presenting the information in an innovative manner. I usually dont bother reading too much into flash's like these, but I found myself in the middle of the article on supposed CIA LSD experiments before I knew I'd been hooked. Therefore, I figre I should point out that this flash has a nice way of pulling you in with a combo of graphic presentation and content. Although, the one thing I found was that the text wasn't formatted in a manner that caught my eye, just as a small sidenote I guess, that could be something worth looking into. Possible immages as well would have been a nice touch.
There wasn't much to say about the sound, it was there, it wasn't so bad... It had little bearing on the actual content, but it was a nice touch really.
Judging this work on the premise that it is more of an informative tool, rather than a flash - Or so it would seem, it's rather well done.
Nice work!
That is all.
urapbad responds:
Wow you're right I should've put pictures or graphics, If I ever do something this again I deffenetly will. Yeah I think it's just hard to read on the internet period, I should have had more contrast between the back ground and words think I might edit it to do that.
Wasn't the CIA stuff interesting? Oh and just as a side note they aren't supposed,
There are newspaper articles on it if u check the sources and some CIA files have been obtained (check the wikipedia source), also CIA admitted to it (it went public for a small time).. etc.
Uuuum yeah
Good Research
This project was very informative . You supported your topics very well , and i became a more knowledgable person , which by the way is the goal you have to accomplish when making a project to inform . The Flurine part was interesting . I didn't know it could melt metal , and yet clean our teeth . It is also responsable for the making of uranium which is so useless right that it goes far beyond uselessness. It becomes a problem. Negative human characteristics makes humans do selfish things . I wish there was a way we could all unite , and stop this fighting . I think the whole world could benefit . I'd be ready to work for it . The whole world would be ready to build a new for a united earth , but no one wants to ask or go the trouble .
If only...
In conclusion , i'd like to congratulate you on a job well done . It was very informative and continue the good work . Althought , next time i hope you make a flash :D
Cheers to you
B
urapbad responds:
I have two flash's if u wanna see them (:
(They are not informative at all and don't make sence)
I think we're heading towards a more united world, just very slowly. Thank you for the positive feed back,
it's funny how people really wish for things like world peace to happen and they don't. I wish I could say people aren't selfish but many are. But couldn't we see if there was peace then everything would be a little better?
Maybe our evils help us in some way?
like when we have wars we have competition and evolution speeds up? It would be nicer though if we could just...
yeah...
I hear u man