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Reviews for "< Lines >"

That was nice

this was a pretty good flash. Everything was smooth. A little suggestion: Make the bodies a little smaller. Your on your way to great flash.

Graphics: Stick figures... With alot of blood :) try to mix up at least 2 different reds. It will make it look better.

Style: No comment

Sound: The sound was OK

Violence: BLOOD BLOOD BLOOD! :)

Interactivity: No comment

Humor: DIE STICKS DIE!

Overall: Same as top

taranramshaw responds:

thanks for a constructive review

overall not bad.

try to base your animations on tweening a little more, and you could do great stuff!

Ok

It was ok. The sticks were Disproportioned and the effects were kinda cheesy. Im feeling nice so i gave you a three.

taranramshaw responds:

thx man for tha 3, no really thanx.

It was OK

It was amusing. But there wasn't enough blood or action to compensate for using stick figures.

taranramshaw responds:

o really..

Not bad

Thanks for voting, crazeyal!

You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 1.7562 to 1.7797!
You're the Saviour! You are one of a number of people who have helped keep this entry in the Portal!

I like it when I'm the Saviour!!

You needed work on the ending, And it's an UPDATED one??? yeesh.

Movies are either jokes or stories. You didn't provide a "why" for the movie, so you needed a punchline or a twist. It just stopped. It's not bad for a beginner, but you have to think from the perspective of the viewer. The use of the lines was original and sometimes entertaining, but you needed a faster pace, more surprises, some spfx, or at least some semblance of plot and/or characters.

Good luck