Good animation
You have excellent drawing and animations skills, which made for a really good flash. Your Japanese, however...I'm sorry, but that was rather painful to listen to. You need to stay away from direct translations with a language like Japanese. It just doesn't work, and this animation is proof of that. Good animation, music was fairly well blended, overall everything was really good. Just...if you want to use Japanese, make sure you get it checked by a native before doing that again, cause that way it is now...well, you get the idea;)