Not bad for round one with Flash
The sound was good and the message behind the story was excellent. you have a lot of potential. Keep at it.
And ignore Broba. People who can't spell shouldn't be harsh critics. Especially on a first-timer.
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Not bad for round one with Flash
The sound was good and the message behind the story was excellent. you have a lot of potential. Keep at it.
And ignore Broba. People who can't spell shouldn't be harsh critics. Especially on a first-timer.
((( NOTBAD )))
~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, hope you got the grade you were looking for, it could use more effort even little things here and there wouldnt hurt, mostly some more effects
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effects and more details all around it will improve greatly...
~~OVERALL~~
A fun class flash but seemed to be abit more then that, nice work...
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Good first try
Laughed out loud when i saw the guy typing at the keyboard which caused a few heads to turn. Little hard to hear the voices. Good first try. Next time try drawing characters/models etc on paper first, scan them in and trace over in flash.
Nice.
By no means a classic, but a decent story and a quirky, fun style. The ending was just a little too preachy for me. Stick with Flash, you've got a crapload of potential.
ok
not too bad... or good. very random animation, but your efforts were good and also good to see people who are learning flash in school/college and taking time to submit their work on here.