no play button
so it might not make it to the portal but that waz pretty good 4 ur 1st flash
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no play button
so it might not make it to the portal but that waz pretty good 4 ur 1st flash
not bad but a little random
it was good nice use of sprite could be better though.
emmm...emmm....
Well it was boring, maybe some dialogs would be good. Nevertheless u kicked my first flash ass. o_O
good job
that was pretty good for your first flash. i liked it. i added it to my favorites. again, good job.
((( NOTBAD )))
~~REVIEW~~
Notbad your for your first, it was actually good, you may want to work on the file abit, it was not real big but is starting to get there, also more effects within the flash can help
on this one, i hope to see more from you soon...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effects and detail, and some compressing would be nice...
~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash, needs more detail though...
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