Ugh...
OK this had alot going for it. It looked sharp but needed better animation. Lucky for you that show doesn't lipsync. Those actors were great. Way better than what belongs online. The sound clips were "accurate" with a admirable amout of detail. As fans of the show I understand why you wanted to be as close looking as possible, but the only way you can respect anyone combining the words "fiction" with "fan" is if they either make a perfect facimily of the original, or go your a direction thats different enough to "make it your own". The way Rumiko Takahashi writes caricter interactions is annoying enough, and you somehow made them worse. They went from two dumbass kids to your two brats. I'm sure that fighting sounded funny at first but it just comes out imature. They main failure here is in the writing. Just throw in some gags that are better than than your ending and you'll have parody.