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Stylish
Loved the beat , but my favorite thing were the choir voices you used on the track,they made this track sound EPIC!, the lyrics are really interesting i think you need to put more feeling to your vocals because you have a lot of potential.
Great Track!!
one of my favorites
-Ruben- Acid Paradox
Thanks man, I didn't make the beat though, I credited shadowville.com if you were wondering. I'm glad you like the lyrics though that's what I care about the most. Damn though i've been told to put more emotion in my flow numerous times I never really think I'm being emotionless when I spit, I guess I'll really have to work on that, thanks for the review man.
Again, this is brilliant!
it built up amazingly with background providing such a fantastic blend that it makes it even greater. I just wish u make more of this. ITs so friggin great.
again it tells such a nice story and the concept it so well portrayed that it puts u right into the tale even though its a rap.
Nice variety on the background music too. Nice work man!
Darklight17
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haha, seems like you're my biggest fan Darklight! You know if there is something that tweaks you a little bit feel free to let me know, I know this cant be perfect! Thanks for listening and for the review.
nice job here
Yo I think this might be your best yet. Nice choice of beat. Shadowville has some good beats to choose from. I agree with Acid. The lyrics were good as hell, but there could be a bit more emotion. Ive had simular concerns. I think alot of it is memorization of lyrics and mic quality. Again, nice job!
Thanks man, really inspired to do something different when I heard this beat, honestly my mic is pretty damn solid for the situation im working with so I think I just need to strive to not get lazy in my emotion as I go through the track, thanks for the review as always....where's that new Nadi shit?
Good
Wow, the lyrics are very long, nice. I like hip hop best when the rapper has something to tell (and preferably something else than "I'm the greatest and here's why"). You came up with a nice story so it is very interesting to listen to it.
Only thing I didn't like was the mechanical like way of speaking in the first few lines. Maybe that was intentional, since you are rapping about "a mechanical hand drops down", but I didn't like it that much.
I think you develope a more natural voice later on, or I just got used to the "mechanical" style. ^^
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You hit the nail on the head pretty much, my delivery is something I will be focusing on for the future as I believe I have the lyric writing down pretty well. for me it's a lot more fun to write a story than just 3 minutes of me telling everyone how great I am at rapping. Thanks for the review Haggard!
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This is pretty cool all around. I enjoyed that you had a story within your vocals and it went along very well with the whole robot/workshop theme that you had going on with this song. The vocals themselves were pretty decent all around.
The amount of lyrics that you have is amazing. Usually when listening to songs it's just the same thing over and over or just very few things being said, but you had so much here.
The music set behind the vocals was perfect and sounded really good with the lyrics. I personally didn't like that other voice that you had in there. The fake sound to it just wasn't really enjoyable at all. I also think that you kind of ended the song abruptly on top of that.
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The gnomes were a completely spur of the moment thing! I was about to export the final product when I got the idea, sorry you didn't like it. Yes it does end abruptly, and that's a problem I face A LOT for the reason you already mentioned, I just write too much lol, and I have a tough time cutting things out. Thanks for the review.