Ah.. it's not that bad
I didn't watch it the whole way through because to tell you the truth it didn't hold my intrest, next time you go to make a movie try making it hold your viewer's intrest by:
1. having new plot explained qquickly or throughout, not an old one made older (no pun intended.. actually scratch that.. it was)
2. Making vivid enviroments and faces.
3. Using some fun ideas to add interactivity or something that will hold someone focus, like when it gets boring.. have something big happen and make a loud noise (but not so loud my poor headphones break)
Good Luck with your next submission and this wasn't awful ^_^