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Crazy story.
That's a right whacky story you have for this song. The scene you described doesn't even come near what I get in my head from listening to this song. But regardless, good work. It's pretty simple, doesn't have a lot of change or variation. That sound you have that somes in at 1:25 is kinda catchy though, a very unique sound. Overall, good job.
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A very nice beat indeed. It's something that I listened to a couple of times just because I enjoyed nodding my head to it and tapping my foot to it. So very fun to listen to, but it does get quite repetitive after awhile.
Really just the same thing over and over. Even when you did add in some different things here and there that also got repetitive because it was the same thing over and over.
Using more variety with your variety (that sounds kind of weird) and perhaps spicing it up with some cool effects or vocals could make this submission less repetitive. Overall I had fun listening to it though.
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Nice
Man, the song is very nice, I was listening while i was at Lockerz, and, it's incredible to hear while you're using the PC!!
The music is very contagious, it has the perfect lenght, because it's a bit repetitive, but the beats are awesome, I didn't see the time passing!! It's really hypnoting!!
The beats are great, the lenght too, you made a cool song, too bad it repeats too much...
Keep it up, man, I like your work, keep making songs!!!
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Roger
Good but a little too simple.
This was good, I liked the intro with the fading in and such.
The synths were good and suited the mood of the song.
A few things though, the start was good, nice and varied, but then the song took a very repetitive turn. The rest of the song was basically the same thing, looped.
The drums could use a bit more variation, they sounded pretty well the same throughout as well.
To make this sound fuller and less plain, you could add some additional effects and instruments as well as some pads, transition, and a pumping buildup.
Not bad for NG house, but could use a few improvements. This will turn out to be a great song!
3/5 7/10
-GST-
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Repetitive
The bass here is pretty good and the melody loop in the background is really catchy, but the song is too repetitive and it's too simple to really keep me interested.
I think you should try to break up the main beat every now and then to introduce some other instruments and/or melodies. This way you would keep the song from getting boring too fast.
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