well
i thought it sucked but since everyon else will vote a 5 on it i did 2
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Reviews for "Envy"
Now you're stuck with doing 6 more.
I've cut back my own particapation in the 7 deadly sins to Gluttony and Sloth. I used to do more Lust but it interfered with Sloth.
The Miinimalist style you used was perfect for a first piece. But a little more play with the palette would have made your characters, (flowers?) more visible.
I gave you a 5 for humor, because there's no question mark.
I look forward to seeing more.
Good start
This is a very good first flash, I enjoyed it.
Neat
I had that problem with my pet rock, j/k
I liked the music and the concept was top notch keep up the good work!
(5)
Well, I liked it.
For a first flash it was pretty good. In fact, I'm not going to blam it so hopefully it will stay on Newgrounds. Would I watch it again? No.
I don't have much advice. Your moral was thought provoking though I don't quite agree with it 100%. Envy can be used to improve oneself even without being in competition with the other person (or plant-thing). Of course, this is hard to do, but you could wish for the qualities of another person (or plant-thing) and try to imitate those qualities for your own self-improvement. But you were talking about levels of envy and jealousy that go far beyond that which are truly self-destructive, just as you have shown in your flash.
Since this is a flash filled with symbolism and what not, you might have employed the color green. Green often symbolizes jealousy as well as nature. Though I did like the symbolism that your color red provided since envy also accompanies anger.
So anyways, good first flash.