Short, but good
I'm not saying it's worthy of best flash ever, but I am saying that it's pretty good, nice work!!! ..
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Reviews for "SO-DUH"
It's a win!
As stupid as it may be it's a winner! Wow, this is REALLY great for the only thing you've submitted. Now while, there may be a lack of plot or storyline, the graphics were really good. There was a lot of gradients in this and I like how objects at the bar or whatever in the backrounds were bitmaps, it gave this overall project a really cool effect. And for what little there was, this had great sound and sound quality. I look forward to more, and I like "So Duh", you should use him again.
petemanpeter responds:
Wow, thanks. That was way more positive than I was expecting. It feels good to hear nice things about a flash after putting so much time into it.
Not too bad at all
You have great potential. Put more time into your next flash with some decent voice acting and you may find yourself making a pretty good series. Keep it up.
K
^^Good Points^^
I liked this, it was kind of cute. It was cool how you made it seem like the shadowed can was a bad guy, but then you changed it all with the ending, which was kind of corny, but made me chuckle. You've got some good animating skill too.
^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, a little corny for an ending, which I'm sure a lot of people won't really appreciate as much as I have.
petemanpeter responds:
Yeah, the whole point of it was to be stupid. Even I think it's corny, and I made it.
Not bad
That was actually really good for a first attempt, the graphics were great, and the animation was fairly smooth.
My advice:
It needs more storyline, more stuff going on in the plot.
It was pretty slow, try speeding up the animation a bit, more stuff happening at once and suchlike.
Possibly make it more dynamic, so the characters move around and the background changes.
It was, indeed, stupid, but I liked it.
You've got a lot of potential, keep working at it.