the pacing is a little slow but
what the hell i thought it was great. you could of course see his death coming from a mile away but the stuff after that, haaaa. anyhow keep doin your thing.
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the pacing is a little slow but
what the hell i thought it was great. you could of course see his death coming from a mile away but the stuff after that, haaaa. anyhow keep doin your thing.
I disagree
I think that this is a good start. Everything was good except for the chat speak...I hate that stuff. As for the no voice thing, I am probably not going to have voices in my upcoming flashes so I know where you are coming from. The sound was rather boring and at times the flash seemed to drag on for no reason, but don't get me wrong, I have tried to make flashes and I know how hard it is if you're inexperienced. The joke at the end was on the verge of almost to cheap, but I still giggled. I look forward to your upcoming series.
Fine, but please refine
If it were to have voice overs in it I would have voted atleast 3, but it didn't so I only voted 2. Your humor is good and needs no work. :) Good job, keep up the good humor. (XD)
please make it faster, god
dude, i dont know if its your computer or not but that was fucking slow, and please add voice overs, it might sound like im flaming you, but if you accually read it it will help you
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Just...rubbish.
One of the things that makes a good flash movie are voice overs, i don't think i speak for myself when i say that we really don't want to read if it can be turned into sound (in this case, voice overs).
And also, if you're not going to include voice overs, at least try and get your spelling correct.