OMFG AWESOME MAN! :D
I just love it, all, animation and sound is damn good!
But It needs a preloader, if it don't fulldownload weel, it stop at certain part
Reviews for "Running Late"
lol
"oh shit, i gotta work. i'll take a shortcut"
Awesome first flash!
This is very awesome for a first flash! This movie is totally frame by frame, with things that arent THAT easy to animate. There is also lots of detail in the backgrounds. Showing off that this artist put alot of effort in it! Although, it all looks a bit scribbly aswell, but that gives it a nice style(: Only thing that bothered me about this flash is the lack of a preloader, sometimes the movie stops playing because it needs to load the following frames.
GR: 8, Awesome for a first flash. The animations run smooth and realistic, although the stickfigure parts were a bit less good.
ST: 9, A nice style^-^
SO: 9, Good pick for an actionbased movie!
VI: 0, No violence. Only someone tripping
IN: 0, No buttons at all! D:
HU: 0, I dont know if there was supposed to be humour in the ending. If there was, it sadly wasnt displayed that well.
OV: 9, Fantastic for a first animation! I hope to see more animations around!
Really good
Thats a really good flash, especially for your first one. There are just three small things i would do.
1. Put a preloader on it, a few times it lagged up, i think it was due to the large file size not being completely loaded.
2. Could you make all the stick characters into your parkour peopl? that would be really cool to see, especially the parkour jumping at the start of the movie, down the building.
3. Make the ending a bit better (but then you already said about that)
Other then that, well cool mate.
First parkour Flash I've watched! The scenes where the main character's not a stick are awesome, and I wish the whole animation would've kept it like that. The moves are swift, the sketchy sceneries work well in putting focus on the character, and then... that Blah ending? Kinda rushed ending, I feel, and maybe those stick parts were a bit rushed too. If you ever get to revising this and perfecting it it would be awesome to watch. Great work!
-cd-