Good job
You sir get an 8/10 for me. Just improve upon the voice work and hopefully more happens next time and you'll get a 10/10 for sure. I like the originality as well.
Reviews for "Halo: Orions Spartans I"
Enzer0 responds:
I swear jesus is gonna get his ass fired if i see this again.
great
great buttt to much talking in the beginning,, needed just a little more action.. also it didnt show when he made the copy of himself.. other than that it was really really good. cant wait for the next one
Enzer0 responds:
Then you would have known it wouldnt have hurt aquilas.
Nice
The animation was awesome and the storyline was rock solid. But you need better voice actors. Theres was no urgency in anyones voice. It just seemed to have that constant monotone of theres something going on, but i just don't give a shit. Know what i mean? Work on that and your set.
Enzer0 responds:
I know what you mean - your interested in whats going on and what you see - not the little details
Some flaws
If they're the first spartans, they wouldn't be using any armor newer than Mark V. And spartans WERE actually genetically enhanced as kids.
This would be a lot better if you could get some better voice acting talent. As far as animation goes, outstanding.
Pretty good
The plotline is pretty cool (so far) and your animation is great! I really liked the show of the spartan looking up at the sky when the animation kind of changed, it was a really cool effect. The only thing that stood out to me was the sound quality for the voices. It wasn't that good and was kind of distracting. Other than that this flash is great!